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423zero
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Topic: Help for author Posted: 28 Nov 19 at 10:52pm |
Far worse sailing prose probably on here.
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Rupert
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Post Options Quote Reply Posted: 28 Nov 19 at 9:53pm |
I often feel like puking, but never have, yet. Mainly by helming. So assume the person is already slightly queasy, then get them looking down, maybe untying something from under the foredeck.
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423zero
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Post Options Quote Reply Posted: 28 Nov 19 at 9:21pm |
I have only been seasick once, that was off Tenby , awful, glad it's never happened again, this was heading west into slow rollers, up and down up and down
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Sam.Spoons
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Post Options Quote Reply Posted: 28 Nov 19 at 8:49pm |
TBH it probably is down to whether you are susceptible or not...... I have a mate who get's seasick in the marina and others who never suffer.
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McCarthy
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Post Options Quote Reply Posted: 28 Nov 19 at 6:12pm |
Thank you, everyone. I think you're all having way too much fun thinking of ways to make someone seasick!
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Sam.Spoons
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Post Options Quote Reply Posted: 27 Nov 19 at 11:04pm |
Second only to the 'vomit comet' for inducing motion sickness
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tink
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Post Options Quote Reply Posted: 27 Nov 19 at 9:31pm |
Good way to make someone seasick.
Give them curried beans for lunch. Take them out on an old trawler converted to electronic nav training vessel, the motion was truly horrible. Send them into the radar room, dark and with the the heat of multiple radars (1980s tech) |
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Sam.Spoons
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Post Options Quote Reply Posted: 27 Nov 19 at 12:25pm |
Why not make it a beautifully built wooden Wayfarer, more plausible for a competent teen to have built than a GRP boat (which requires moulds, usually only available in boatyards). Unless the back story is that Mitch helped out in his Uncles boatyard?
Change 'bow hatch' to 'foredeck' Roller furling jib to complement the mainsail. I've never heard the expression 'ware the boom' and a competent sailor would never allow the boat to accidentally gybe due to a wind shift (as you imply) especially in a fresh breeze. Making the gybe deliberate would be better and Gerard could still be surprised by the manoeuvre even with the usual 'ready to gybe' and 'gybe ho' commands if he is not used to boats. They would come around onto the new tack (gybe) on a broad reach, not sailing by the lee (while they could then change course to sail by the lee a good cruising sailor would not usually do so). A broad reach would be faster than a run too supporting the 'skimming across the water' and the rather nice description of the bow wave. Change the later reference to a broad reach to 'beam reach' maybe and them hiking to keep the boat balanced against the power of the sails. HTH edit,
agreed Edited by Sam.Spoons - 27 Nov 19 at 12:28pm |
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ian.r.mcdonald
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Post Options Quote Reply Posted: 27 Nov 19 at 12:21pm |
As the man said " two nations divided by a common language" . I apologise in advance if wrong, but I read US twang. For the UK it's that shift needed , not any nautical corrections.
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McCarthy
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Post Options Quote Reply Posted: 27 Nov 19 at 11:19am |
The boat is similar to a Wayfarer - I can give it two sails if it needs them, especially to go faster. BTW, he's the son of a boat-builder, who builds cabin cruisers, so at 16 he knew what he was doing.
This is the extract. (Please try not to laugh if I have it all wrong - just tell me what to change. Thanks.) A small elegant craft, just a
little over sixteen feet from tip to stern, perfect for a single-handed sailor
but big enough to take three or four passengers. Gerard looked less than
enthusiastic. “We’re going out in that?” he queried. “Isn’t it a bit small?” “Not at all.” Mitch had come up
behind them. “She’s a beauty – I built her myself when I was sixteen.” The expression on Gerard’s face
suggested that revelation had done nothing to improve his confidence. “OK – Sam, can you take in the
bow-line?” The familiar movements came back
to her at once as she untied the line and coiled it neatly, stowing it under
the bow-hatch. Mitch cast off the stern-line and gunned the outboard motor to
turn the boat and steer her down the centre of the fairway. As they cleared the marina Mitch
released the boom-bag, cut the outboard, and hauled on the halyard to raise the
sail. It unfurled, billowing in the
wind. The boat responded instantly, seeming to lift and dance, skimming across
the waves. While they had been talking the
wind had veered. “’Ware the boom,” Mitch warned as it began to sweep across the
deck. Gerard looked up in alarm and scrambled to get out of the way – not that
there was any real danger. Now they were running downwind,
and the boat began to roll. Mitch adjusted the sails and they came around to a
new tack, running slightly by the lee. They picked up speed, almost flying
across the sparkling water, the spray from their bow-wave catching the light
and fracturing it into a rainbow of shimmering colours. That brief distraction had taken
their attention from the shifting wind, and they were beginning to roll again.
To Sam’s surprise Mitch seemed a little slow in bringing them round, and for a
moment they were almost wallowing beam-on to the waves. She suddenly realised that Gerard
had barely spoken since they had left the shelter of the Marina, and when she
turned to him she was shocked by his pallor. And then abruptly he pulled
himself up and leaned over the side, and retched violently. He was too good a sailor to let
his boat wallow like that. Had he done it deliberately, to get rid of Gerard
for the day? “Would you like to sail her?” She hesitated. Yes, she would
like to, but… “It’s been a long time - I don’t know if I’d remember how.” “You never forget.” “OK.” She moved over to take the
tiller. It was a perfect day for sailing.
A brisk breeze was filling the sail, the ropes were thrumming beneath her hand.
It felt like the old days. She sensed as the wind veered,
and instinctively she let out the ropes until the sail began to luff, then drew
them in again until it filled with wind. Mitch had hiked out over the high side
to keep the keel balanced, and they settled again into a broad reach, sailing
out towards the horizon. He had taken over the tiller a
while ago, sailing out into open water. Sam had been hiking out as they had
made the turn into the wind, Edited by McCarthy - 27 Nov 19 at 11:41am |
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